I have no problems with the language of the review; not everyone is born to be a great writer or an orator. It is a skill to possess.
Nor can I find inaccuracies in the points you make in general. Fair enough from your point of view. I take it as a compliment on the part of the game that it is engineered for the patient and well disciplined. And no offense to the game I really love but it does feel slow especially in the beginning when you are sent off to kill rats and bugs and wolves at best; not to mention the "youngster" Sarah Oakheart and her springy step In short: Fair enough.
But I am begging you; change the video you used and put something where you can actually see the game and not actors in a mini-movie.
Thank you for your review
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