Tried it out and it sounds good, though I did make a few minor tweeks and added on a bit more, heres mine:

Without shift:

1-2-3-7-6
1-2-3-6-5 - 1-2-1
2-3-7-6
1-2-3-6-5 - 1-2-3
3-5-3-2 - C1